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When you talk to me my world gets brighter.
Surprised you fell for such a distorted writer.
When you look at me with eyes so true.
I can't help but think of my future with you.

You take my hand and never let go.
With our love so true yet no-one knows.
We can lay forever and our love will never die.
No-one can compare to us no matter how hard they try.

The miles apart will never stand in the way.
But when we finally are together there will be so much to say.
One hug and I'll never let go.
And my feeling for you will only grow.

We must suffer the wait for us to together,
But I promise you I love you like no other.
My journey begins to find your heart.
But when I arrive I'll know where to start.
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:iconnever-tread-lightly:
Beautiful. Very touching and so personal, I could just feel your emotions bleeding out. Absolutely lovely and sweet and cute and jdfhlkfhdskjfh love it! :)
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ZaFei Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank;3 I try to make them like that so everyone can relate.
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:iconnever-tread-lightly:
You are so welcome :)
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Sanddune798 Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
D'awwww. c:
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ZaFei Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What ;o
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Sanddune798 Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just this. I think it's really cute and sweet.
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ZaFei Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well thanks ;p
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XerxesTexasToast Apr 19, 2013  Student General Artist
D'aww, that's cute. It's really touching to read these words, no matter who they are directed at. You certainly do a good job at stirring up emotions. Keep up the excellent work. :D
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ZaFei Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ;D Really appreciate it ;3
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YumeYorunotenshi Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. This is really neat.
I bet lots of people hope to have a love like this sometime in their life.
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